30 minutes and 500 words on the Rent-a-Mech. I thought the writing felt a bit slow! Transitions are always the trickiest. I almost fell into the trap of the never ending dialogue, where the characters talk about what is about to happen before it happens. I might torture my loved ones with that in real life, but not my readers. Ha!
Tore up another scene card. Tearing up the cards is immensely satisfying.